Wednesday, November 19, 2008
250 response Module III
Between my rough draft and my final draft I made several changes, take for example the inclusion of a new paragraph entailing my own personal experiences with the subject of wisdom. I felt this was important because in a summary you should not only paraphrase the item which you read but also include your own feedback to better explain the article. Also by relating the subject to my own life shows that I have an understanding of what I read. At several points in the essay I added more examples such as the references to Joseph Stalin and Hitler when referring to intelligent individuals holding bad purpose. I also added a short piece about Anne Frank explaining how wisdom may have developed so quickly in the thirteen year old girl. I did this because examples help with clarity, you can directly define something, but relating it to a real life example really brings the definition together. In the rough draft I failed to draw connections between the 3 articles, so I tried to do so by adding sentences which connected the articles. I also changed the conclusion to sum up what all the articles mean in one paragraph allowing the connections to become more evident. When writing the rough draft I couldn’t seem the piece together a conclusion, though I feel the one I created for the final draft completes the task appropriately. Also looking back at the article after several days of my final draft I feel I could’ve made more changes, perhaps a second draft before the final would have been more appropriate for me. It’s a good representation of how nothing is ever perfect, there are always changes that can be made.
Rough Draft, whoops forgot to post :/
Wisdom
“The quality or state of being wise; knowledge of what is true or right coupled with just judgment as to action; sagacity, discernment, or insight,” as defined by Dictionary.com Unabridged. Wisdom is something which is developed over time in most people and is usually not evident till the later stages of one’s life. One is to question how does this develop, what conditions facilitate the development of wisdom, which conditions do not?
Professor Thao N. Le, of Colorado State University, believes there are two main things which provide means to developing wisdom, cultural values and life experiences. His study particularly, “…explores and extends the discussion of life crises on wisdom, specifically, the extent to which different life crises are related to wisdom, and are moderated by values for older adults” (Le 260). Le believes there are two types of wisdom, practical, which entails knowledge and understanding about human nature, and the ability to provide judgment and solve complex human problems, and transcendent, which entails knowledge, insight, and understanding about existential dilemmas and the nature of being. Practical tends to results in historical, interpretive kinds of knowledge, whereas transcendent wisdom reflects emancipator interests. The types of life experiences to be examined are those which are considered stressful or negative, and positive life experiences. Professor Thao Le conducted a study which one hundred ninety-nine participants, half European and half Vietnamese American, took part in one and half hour interview assessing their wisdom and values. When referring to values Le pays particular attention to two factors, openness to change and self-enhancement, and conservation value, values centered toward security and safety needs. The study provided evidence showed that the stressful experiences which people face throughout life may have negative effects, but also facilitate a positive effect on wisdom. It also showed a correlation between stressful experiences and development of wisdom. These resulted in the two different types of values mentioned above. Dependence of which type of value is created is on what types of experiences are faced, macro social/war, family, health, etc.
The next article to be explored is one by Professor Robert Sternberg titled, “What is wisdom and how can we develop it?” In this article he defines wisdom and explains a new idea on how to promote its development. Sternberg explains that wisdom is not something necessarily connected to intelligence and even states that intelligence often comes with qualities such as egocentrism, omniscience, omnipotence, and invulnerability. Intelligence with such things can evolve into using ones knowledge for bad purpose. While knowledge integrated with wisdom, or even wisdom on its own provides actions for the common good. Professor Sternberg believes that wisdom is the ability to use this intelligence and experience to appropriately balance, intrapersonal, interpersonal, and extrapersonal interests over short and long term periods of time and facilitate “adaptation to existing environments, shaping of existing environments, and selection of new environments” (Sternberg 165). Sternberg then continues to provide a plan to integrate the teaching of wisdom into primary schools in order for individuals to be taught this concept at a young age. Doing so would teach students to balance their life, and make better decisions, thus allowing students to develop somewhat of an artificial wisdom whereas they don’t need to face such negative experiences to develop their wisdom.
Doctor Paul Wong proposes his own definition of wisdom, “Wisdom may be defined as a special gift or ability to see clearly, discern correctly, understand deeply, and judge appropriately. It is based on the humility and openness to listen and learn from unlikely sources, including the mouth of a child and the whisper of a dying man. It involves the courage to be true to oneself, to do what is right and to achieve maximum good in spite of situational constraints and personal dangers. As a spiritual gift, it is to be received with humility and gratitude; as a human ability, cultivated with diligence; and as a character of authenticity and courage, practiced consistently.” Dr. Wong feels there are 3 different examples to which wisdom is acquired, the first entails grasping of the concept with little to none help; usually common in rare cases with intelligent individuals. The next is acquired through mentors or teachers who instill their wisdom on one, and the last is defined as “learning things the hard way,” through trial and error, and negative experiences. Wisdom is often spiritual and taught traditionally through religious books, such as the Koran, Bible, and books of proverbs. Dr. Wong also provides two lists, one which provides profiles of people who are wise and another which provides portraits of intellectual fools, those who are smart but not wise. He also makes the point that it is much easier to find “fools’ paradise” than it is to find wisdom, but often the pursuance of wisdom keeps you away from the wrong path. Dr. Wong holds a common phrase which he passes to all his patients, “wisdom is the touchstone of character rather than intellect.”
Need a conclusion……
“The quality or state of being wise; knowledge of what is true or right coupled with just judgment as to action; sagacity, discernment, or insight,” as defined by Dictionary.com Unabridged. Wisdom is something which is developed over time in most people and is usually not evident till the later stages of one’s life. One is to question how does this develop, what conditions facilitate the development of wisdom, which conditions do not?
Professor Thao N. Le, of Colorado State University, believes there are two main things which provide means to developing wisdom, cultural values and life experiences. His study particularly, “…explores and extends the discussion of life crises on wisdom, specifically, the extent to which different life crises are related to wisdom, and are moderated by values for older adults” (Le 260). Le believes there are two types of wisdom, practical, which entails knowledge and understanding about human nature, and the ability to provide judgment and solve complex human problems, and transcendent, which entails knowledge, insight, and understanding about existential dilemmas and the nature of being. Practical tends to results in historical, interpretive kinds of knowledge, whereas transcendent wisdom reflects emancipator interests. The types of life experiences to be examined are those which are considered stressful or negative, and positive life experiences. Professor Thao Le conducted a study which one hundred ninety-nine participants, half European and half Vietnamese American, took part in one and half hour interview assessing their wisdom and values. When referring to values Le pays particular attention to two factors, openness to change and self-enhancement, and conservation value, values centered toward security and safety needs. The study provided evidence showed that the stressful experiences which people face throughout life may have negative effects, but also facilitate a positive effect on wisdom. It also showed a correlation between stressful experiences and development of wisdom. These resulted in the two different types of values mentioned above. Dependence of which type of value is created is on what types of experiences are faced, macro social/war, family, health, etc.
The next article to be explored is one by Professor Robert Sternberg titled, “What is wisdom and how can we develop it?” In this article he defines wisdom and explains a new idea on how to promote its development. Sternberg explains that wisdom is not something necessarily connected to intelligence and even states that intelligence often comes with qualities such as egocentrism, omniscience, omnipotence, and invulnerability. Intelligence with such things can evolve into using ones knowledge for bad purpose. While knowledge integrated with wisdom, or even wisdom on its own provides actions for the common good. Professor Sternberg believes that wisdom is the ability to use this intelligence and experience to appropriately balance, intrapersonal, interpersonal, and extrapersonal interests over short and long term periods of time and facilitate “adaptation to existing environments, shaping of existing environments, and selection of new environments” (Sternberg 165). Sternberg then continues to provide a plan to integrate the teaching of wisdom into primary schools in order for individuals to be taught this concept at a young age. Doing so would teach students to balance their life, and make better decisions, thus allowing students to develop somewhat of an artificial wisdom whereas they don’t need to face such negative experiences to develop their wisdom.
Doctor Paul Wong proposes his own definition of wisdom, “Wisdom may be defined as a special gift or ability to see clearly, discern correctly, understand deeply, and judge appropriately. It is based on the humility and openness to listen and learn from unlikely sources, including the mouth of a child and the whisper of a dying man. It involves the courage to be true to oneself, to do what is right and to achieve maximum good in spite of situational constraints and personal dangers. As a spiritual gift, it is to be received with humility and gratitude; as a human ability, cultivated with diligence; and as a character of authenticity and courage, practiced consistently.” Dr. Wong feels there are 3 different examples to which wisdom is acquired, the first entails grasping of the concept with little to none help; usually common in rare cases with intelligent individuals. The next is acquired through mentors or teachers who instill their wisdom on one, and the last is defined as “learning things the hard way,” through trial and error, and negative experiences. Wisdom is often spiritual and taught traditionally through religious books, such as the Koran, Bible, and books of proverbs. Dr. Wong also provides two lists, one which provides profiles of people who are wise and another which provides portraits of intellectual fools, those who are smart but not wise. He also makes the point that it is much easier to find “fools’ paradise” than it is to find wisdom, but often the pursuance of wisdom keeps you away from the wrong path. Dr. Wong holds a common phrase which he passes to all his patients, “wisdom is the touchstone of character rather than intellect.”
Need a conclusion……
Friday, October 31, 2008
Module II 500 word blog post
Gender Differences in "Social Portraits" Reflected in MySpace Profiles is an article written by Melissa Magnuson and Lauren Dundes elaborating on gender roles which become evident even upon MySpace. Magnuson and Dundes use an experiment as support for their opinions. The experiment consisted of 100 individuals, 49 of which were male, and the remaining female. In order to provide an accurate experiment, profiles were simply viewed without asking questions to prevent inaccurate data. While looking at peoples profiles between the ages of 17 to 29 they took note of different parts of the profile, such as: personal quote, age, gender, relationship status, education level, containment of significant other in profile picture, number of times significant other was mentions in both the "About Me" and "Interests" sections, number of opposite sex friends in Top Eight, and the number of total friends. For most of the previously listed, gender differences were unapparent, the results remained the same for both sexes. Though distinct differences became present with regard to mentioning your significant other in your profile. As with males, 43 percent didn’t' mention their significant other at all, almost half, 43 percent mentioned them once, and only 14 percent mentioned her more than once. Compared the females, where 16 percent didn't mention their significant other, 47 percent mentioned him once, and 37 percent mentioned him more than once. Magnuson and Dundes conclude that this conveys the idea women revolve their lives around men, and that women feel they must be the partner who is more devoted in the relationship. They go on to mention how women tend to use men to define their identity while men seem to treat women as another section in there already completes life. I agree with their idea, from personal experience it seems that women seem to glorify the fact of them having a boyfriend. While guys, whose are in no rush lose any of their masculinity, continue about their normal rituals with the incorporation of a female into their schedule. When watching sitcoms on television consider the role that the male plays, in most cases he is the insensitive jerk who tends to put his “guys” first. You typically see this character ditching his wife for a football game, or showing up late because he was at the bar with his friends. No wonder these gender roles are so apparent, because even the media instills them upon us. This is not to say that these really are sensitive or don’t care as much about their significant other as she does for him, but it is just roles which must be maintained due to fear that he will feel emasculated by showing this behavior. Aside from gender roles there is another perspective to be examined when considering why girls mention guys more then guys mention girls. Perhaps guys are more insecure than women and the fact that they mention their significant other less increases the chances of another feel approaching the man. Thus, providing means to boost his ego. When someone receives the label of “taken” they become a lesser object of interest to the opposite sex, maybe men still want to feel desired by more than just their girlfriend. The females are most likely more susceptible to mention guys because they take pride in having a significant other and like to parade this to everyone else. MySpace provides a great basis to show many of these, but drawing the conclusions can become vague, only one thing is for certain and that being that there are great differences between genders.
Module II research essay
Joseph Fenner
Professor Yerks
Composition 106
30 October 2008
Professor Yerks
Composition 106
30 October 2008
Cell Phones: a Progression of Society
“The ’regressive’ and ‘subversive’ impact of landline phones is very much amplified and generalized by mobile phone devices because they empower informal micro-social networks to communicate much more efficiently beyond any institutional control” (Geser 9). Hans Geser is wrong to say this; the mobile phone holds a progressive impact on society. He makes several points, stating that mobile phones undermine societal development by: increasing the pervasiveness of primary, particularistic social bonds, reducing the need for time-based scheduling and coordination, undermining institutional boundary controls and replacing location-based with person-based communicative systems, providing support for anachronistic “pervasive roles.” I disagree with all of these beliefs and find myself in complete opposition. Mobile phones may be a result of some of these, but the negative effects are minute and the benefits effectively outweigh the costs.
Geser states, “The mobile can function as a ‘pacifier for adults’ that reduces feelings of loneliness and vulnerability in any place and at any time.” He considers this a regression while from a different perspective it could be considered a solution. If there is an opportunity to reduce loneliness and vulnerability, why not use it? In moments of social awkwardness people tend to look to their cell phone for support. When support is available for use, why ignore it? Geser would respond, “Individuals may become less prone to develop certain ‘social competencies.’” I must disagree, although cell phones are available to us at most instances sometimes they are not. “…the device does not always fit into the flow of co-present interaction, but that when thinking of mediated interaction within the group, mobile communication facilitates the development of cohesion through the use of various ritual devices (argot, greeting forms, humor, gossip) and by playing cupid for lovers” (Ling 175). Ling speaks of face-to-face confrontation, where most of our social skills are directly developed; in such situations there isn’t time to reach out for your lifeline (cell phone). Geser continues, “Individuals may easily unlearn the ability to rely on their own judgment, memory and reflection.” As Geser mentioned there is a social network of close friends, at one time you are bound to be asked for your judgment from another individual in this mobile world; in a sense these abilities are still learned just in a different way.
Geser really focuses on the idea of using cell phones to escape lonely and awkward situations. One must focus their attention on the use of cell phones to escape a dangerous or even life threatening situation. “Emergency calls placed on cellular phones are rising rapidly. People are reporting drunk drivers and staying a safe distance behind them to lead the police to the exact location. The Virginia State Police reported 100 calls to 911 in a single day back in June of 1997. These calls consisted of reports of traffic accidents, drunken drivers, vehicle and brush fires, and some crimes in progress “(D’Aiello). Not a single person can argue that cell phones aren’t vital in situations like these. Whether or not cell phones create prolonged infantile dependency, people can only agree that cell phones have aided in creating a safer environment for all, and that far outweighs any negative result.
When discussing the decline of time-based scheduling and coordination Geser brings for several points. He begins by mentioning the presence of coordinating plants being centuries of age. He states, “cell phones reduce the need for temporal preplanning, insofar as rearrangements can be at any moment even very shortly before an agreed time.” This sounds like a great result but Geser concludes it will result in people having trouble planning their daily life or people becoming accustomed to the informalities of these planning methods. Consider that fact that cell phones have calendars, to do lists, and memo pads which all promote planning. Though Geser feels that this “in an instant” planning will lessen the impact of the future and past. When contemplating this idea, realize it’s the event itself that defines the memory not the anticipation created from the lengthy scheduling process. Considering the benefits allowed by cell phones during the planning process you only see an advancement of social order. Where people are able to cancel plans already in effect, or create plans to fit spaces where they didn’t imagine having the time to do so.
Geser then goes on to mention the deregulation of institutional boundary controls and the shift from location-based to person-based social systems. A location-based system is what is considered our landline phones, in that they are at a fixed location, so the communication is between locations. Cell phones move around with the person, hence the person-based social system. Geser points out that before cell phones one had to phone somewhere to communicate with a specific someone. He states, “cell phones undermine these traditional orders by creating direct links between particular individuals: irrespective of their institutional role and location.” There is such a thing as cell phone etiquette, such as there are right and wrong places to use your mobile device. Restaurants are beginning to issue policies which entail turning your phone on silent while in the restaurant. At movie theatres they mention before the show starts to turn phones off, and most hospitals post signs declaring that all cell phones must be turned off (Lynn). The fact that a person violates these is a result of bad parenting or bad manners, not the cell phone. Some people choose to follow this etiquette, and some people don’t; it’s the same as those who choose to break the law and those who do not.
Geser makes his last point that cell phones are support for the survival or anachronistic “pervasive roles.” Hans Geser brings up the idea that having a cell phone broadens ones professional life. Giving the option to always be at work, whether it is between a doctor and patient, or business owner and customer, the relationship can still be upheld after the institution is closed. He states that this will result in little to no separation between a professional and personal life, allowing for your professional contacts to intrude during your private life. “One higher order consequence of wireless communication is that it makes us more responsible, for both our own actions and those of people for whom we have assumed responsibility. In effect, we become more subject to social control” (Katz 1999: 17). This is true, but one must realize that those individuals who decide to supply their clientele with their phone number assume this responsibility in doing so. They are providing better service to their clients to make sure that they get the best care possible; thus creating a better relation between the two, and benefitting both the business and their customers.
Sure, it does bridge a gap between your professional and personal life but it is also responsible for enhancing your private life as Richard Ling states, “the mobile telephone is the tool of the intimate sphere- that is, the sphere that includes our familial and romantic interests,” and, “we must be open to both intimates and strangers when we interact in daily life, the mobile phone tips the balance in favor of the intimate sphere of friends and family” (Ling 159). Therefore, the mobile phone is responsible for increasing the intimacy of certain relationships and, in fact, strengthening your private life by providing an always available network to reach your loved ones.
Hans Geser viewed the situation from the wrong perspective. He pointed out minute faults created by the cell phones and didn’t investigate the benefits. His views are mostly based on what is considered traditional, which is out-of-date considering how much our world is changing. Norms are being broken constantly to heed way for new ideas and technologies; which is ultimately expected to result in an entirely new social order. Cellular devices provide a social advancement for human beings making our lives easier and supplying us with more opportunities. They have so many capabilities which can make life more manageable. The cell phone is one of the greatest technological advancements ever conceived.
Works Cited
D’Aiello, Alan. What are the Advantages and Disadvantages of Cellular Phones. (n.d.). Retrieved: 27 October 2008. <http://bryant2.bryant.edu/~ehu/h364proj/sprg_98/daiello/page3.htm>
Geser, Hans. Knowledge, Technology, & Policy. Vol. 19, No. 1, pp. 8-18. Spring 2006.
Katz, James. Connections. Social and Cultural Studies of the Telephone in American Life, New
Brunswick, NJ: Transaction Publishers, 1999.
Ling, Richard. New Tech, New Ties: How mobile communication is reshaping social cohesion.
Massachusetts: Massachusetts Institute of Technology, 2008.
Lynn, K. Cell Phone Etiquette. 26 May 2008. Retrieved: 27 October 2008.
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Monday, September 29, 2008
module 1
Reflection
I chose to present my subject in a PowerPoint presentation because it almost feels like a proposal. It is a professional way to organize and present you opinion. For the title slide of my presentation I chose what to me, seemed like a shaky font for the title. I did this because since this is a controversial issue it is shaky and there to different sides to the issue. So the font is shaky portraying that you could go either way. The second slide of my presentation, labeled “Intro,” introduced to subject in short paragraph. For the background color I chose a light blue because the subject I am advocating is offshore drilling which occurs in the water. I also put in a photo of two people arguing from clip art since once again there are two sides to the argument. I also put in a photo which has a pun stating “Pain in the Gas.” This is because really the main reason that this issue has risen is because of the rising gas prices.
The next slide listing positive effects has a rainbow background because a rainbow is something which everyone can agree is upbeat. Not to mention that “effects” are the result of something, and a rainbow is something you would typically see after a storm. I then placed a photo of low gas prices because I mentioned in the paragraph that a positive effect is the lowering of gas prices. From clip art I chose an image of an oil rig with a worker nearby it; mainly to emphasize the new jobs created from offshore drilling. The next slide was presenting the negative effects. I put this slide directly after the positive effects to comply with the common method of “good news first, then the bad news.” I chose the background as black because of the common theme of death along with the clip art of the grim reaper. I then included pictures of animals to emphasize the effects on the environment; along with a picture of an oil spill.
When showing John McCain’s opinion I picked a font called chiller for the title because I don’t really agree with McCain. I also chose a photo of him hugging Bush because most people would agree that Bush is not a great president. The background was grey because I believe McCain’s ideas are dull. For Obama I chose a recycling emblem for the background and placed him in the middle of it to show that he is about creating a more environmental energy source.
When it came to my opinion I picked a font which to mean seemed to show strength to show that I am confident in my opinion. I also included an image of a panic button because I mention citizens panicking; then a scale to emphasize that the negative effects outweigh the positive effects.
I chose to present my subject in a PowerPoint presentation because it almost feels like a proposal. It is a professional way to organize and present you opinion. For the title slide of my presentation I chose what to me, seemed like a shaky font for the title. I did this because since this is a controversial issue it is shaky and there to different sides to the issue. So the font is shaky portraying that you could go either way. The second slide of my presentation, labeled “Intro,” introduced to subject in short paragraph. For the background color I chose a light blue because the subject I am advocating is offshore drilling which occurs in the water. I also put in a photo of two people arguing from clip art since once again there are two sides to the argument. I also put in a photo which has a pun stating “Pain in the Gas.” This is because really the main reason that this issue has risen is because of the rising gas prices.
The next slide listing positive effects has a rainbow background because a rainbow is something which everyone can agree is upbeat. Not to mention that “effects” are the result of something, and a rainbow is something you would typically see after a storm. I then placed a photo of low gas prices because I mentioned in the paragraph that a positive effect is the lowering of gas prices. From clip art I chose an image of an oil rig with a worker nearby it; mainly to emphasize the new jobs created from offshore drilling. The next slide was presenting the negative effects. I put this slide directly after the positive effects to comply with the common method of “good news first, then the bad news.” I chose the background as black because of the common theme of death along with the clip art of the grim reaper. I then included pictures of animals to emphasize the effects on the environment; along with a picture of an oil spill.
When showing John McCain’s opinion I picked a font called chiller for the title because I don’t really agree with McCain. I also chose a photo of him hugging Bush because most people would agree that Bush is not a great president. The background was grey because I believe McCain’s ideas are dull. For Obama I chose a recycling emblem for the background and placed him in the middle of it to show that he is about creating a more environmental energy source.
When it came to my opinion I picked a font which to mean seemed to show strength to show that I am confident in my opinion. I also included an image of a panic button because I mention citizens panicking; then a scale to emphasize that the negative effects outweigh the positive effects.
Thursday, September 18, 2008
Project Proposal, Module 1
For my visual advocacy project I propose to advocate the issue of offshore drilling. I think it would be a great project for me to do as I know little about the subject, but would like to learn about it. I will investigate both sides of this issue and decide whether I am in opposition or not. In my project I will include both sides of the issue supported with research. In my research I will include politics, describing both the democratic and republican take on this issue. I will include how this issue affects our environment, our economy, and American citizens personally.
For the photo portion of the project I plan to include: photos of offshore drilling sites which emphasize the process of offshore drilling, maps of where drilling will occur, and photos of the environmental impact. For the comic strip there are two aspects that I can show; the one I choose is dependent upon my decision to support or oppose. One aspect would portray the negative effects that offshore drilling would have on our environment; showing the progression in a timeline fashion. The other one would be the opposite showing the progression of the positive effects of offshore drilling.
For a 30 second flash animation I will create an animation showing offshore drilling or from the opposing side create an animation incorporating green peace. The five page website will include: Senator Obama’s and Senator McCain’s side on the issue, Green Peace’s involvement, links to other websites covering the subject, graphs/charts of the effect on our economy (if possible), and several paragraphs expressing my opinion on the subject. The PowerPoint presentation will serve as a conclusion and sum up all my main points of the project.
For the photo portion of the project I plan to include: photos of offshore drilling sites which emphasize the process of offshore drilling, maps of where drilling will occur, and photos of the environmental impact. For the comic strip there are two aspects that I can show; the one I choose is dependent upon my decision to support or oppose. One aspect would portray the negative effects that offshore drilling would have on our environment; showing the progression in a timeline fashion. The other one would be the opposite showing the progression of the positive effects of offshore drilling.
For a 30 second flash animation I will create an animation showing offshore drilling or from the opposing side create an animation incorporating green peace. The five page website will include: Senator Obama’s and Senator McCain’s side on the issue, Green Peace’s involvement, links to other websites covering the subject, graphs/charts of the effect on our economy (if possible), and several paragraphs expressing my opinion on the subject. The PowerPoint presentation will serve as a conclusion and sum up all my main points of the project.
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